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Ice cream Sweet peach flavor At the peach packing shed Too hot to enjoy ambience UMMM!! Sweet

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/3/2015 4:12:00 AM

Sara, you got me wanting to eat an ice cream! Yummy!~Olive ELoisa =)

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/25/2015 12:06:00 PM

Sounds like a tasty date! Peace ice cram - never had it but I want to! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Constance La France

Date: 6/18/2015 3:12:00 PM

Sara, nicely written, I am actually having ice cream right now, it is very hot here in my little part of Canada and thanks for visiting my poem, my cloud

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/18/2015 1:08:00 PM

Sara, I enjoyed your "sweet" cinquain! The ice cream sounds delightful (I'm an ice cream junkie), the heat not so much. Love, Kim

Eve Roper

Date: 6/18/2015 7:42:00 AM

Sara, you have picked my fav. icecream. a 7 Hugs Eve