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The Darkest - Blackest Tuesday (Part Lv)

The thunder so loud scared Ginny , she tripped on the last step ,fell on the porch spilling her berries Another flash of lighting and in that split second “Mom” became a very dark and Evil “MA’AM” The Ebony Crop came out of the bow and with a force I’d never seen Ma’am use, across Ginny’s thighs “YOU little *****, I slave all morning making breakfast , I take you out to meet mother nature; pick berries And this is the thanks I get I want all of YOU to empty your buckets Right here on the porch Right NOW” Billy was first and then went to help Ginny; Billy YOU need help I said The Crop hit me right in the mouth I spit teeth and blood all over Alice’s blouse; his name is William and then a sight none of us had ever seen Ma’am hit Billy in the back of the head he fell on the floor and didn’t move Bobby tried to grab the Crop She split his face from forehead to chin. “Now dance, Dance on those berries; stomp them into the porch Screaming, crying, blood , tears flying: a lunatic waving a blood coated riding crop in victory. Billy got up “get over here William and start jumping on the berries, your not crying , there’s no babies in this house” “HA HA HA HEH HEH I am the Queen, the ruler“---it didn’t seem possible but Ma’am’s eyes went black “George Francis get your ass over here; ”Ma’am” open your hand OPEN IT Berries! YOU little Bastard Lightning lit up the yard for the fatal blow right in the throat blood spew from his mouth and from his neck “Awice Awice wook down the dwive way Dawwy’s coming home Bobby, Jim .and Joe tackled MA”AM I couldn’t talk vewy well George, George “ Harry my real Mommy is right over there Calling me Home Good-bye see you at my new house, tell everyone I Love them even MA’am.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/13/2013 3:54:00 PM
Violence from someone who claims to be a nurturer is the most confusing and evil thing that can happen to the trust of a child. It can either make or break your spirit. I think with you it made it stronger. Much love. Your S-N & P SuZ
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Date: 3/3/2012 11:31:00 PM
Intriguing and so very disturbing. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece...reading on.. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/20/2011 8:35:00 AM
Unbelievable. You put me right there with you, Harry. I can't believe this evil woman was in charge of innocents. LShe had to be insane. Thank you for directing me to this series. I wish I had been there for you.. Love, Mom
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Date: 3/15/2010 8:22:00 PM
she is mean as Hell. .thats too abnormal, and very dark.there is something beyond the brain wrong with her.her eyes turned black because she tormented "your" spirit.you are a special spirit, Harry.and also, because she committed that cruelty on an extreme level to you and the others.your brother, George, i have no words.and for you, i am so relieved to know now that your are still alive to tell this tragic and dark story.you were protected.i think.you to have witnessed this was. .something else.
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Date: 2/10/2010 1:34:00 PM
WOW.. impressive HG.. a true tale of horror .. I hope they are imaginative only and not the true state of your childhood... enjoyed .. luv.. "Sweetheart".. going to do the blog for u and Dane Ann as the contact poets for more info.. luv.. "Sweetheart"...
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Date: 1/22/2010 7:39:00 AM
this is the part where it gets really good, like a Stephen King story!!
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Date: 12/14/2009 5:35:00 PM
Are these true stories?If they are I am sorry.
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Date: 10/25/2009 11:28:00 AM
Yes I read this, I guess My comment didn't go through the first time, awesome true write, My hat is off, God bless you my friend, I am glad I read this, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 8/13/2009 11:57:00 AM
Dreadful and unbelievably true??? Right??? This would make a great movie.... Probably as good and as bad as Sybil. Do you remember that one? These writes are captivating. Lovingly, DAS-J
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Date: 7/18/2009 2:18:00 PM
Amazing the way "Ma'am" turned into a tyrant and I certainly was startled by the fatal strike of lightning. How will this end? To the epilogue...
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Date: 7/18/2009 3:01:00 AM
HG..its not possible..it just cant be. I cannot write whats in my heart..its just to painful. Youve done a wonderful job here..it makes the reader hang on every word. I love you. BG
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