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The Dark Destroyer

The Dark Destroyer Part I The void arrives Sucks you in and down Into the nothingness Only darkness breathes Life out of focus It seems all is lost Panic stricken, then Realisation hits Aware that it’s here The Dark Destroyer! The void door closes No strength to fight You succumb, averse No one understands It’s a lonely battle Inside your own head Trapped, Defeated Part II Defeated – not dead! Many a battle Still to overcome Take action, right now! Shout loud, ‘they’ will hear The void door re-opens Join forces, unite With ‘they’ who can help ‘They’ will stand by you Guide you, comfort you Give positive light. It’s a classic duel Of light verses dark Who wins in the end? It’s you who decides!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/6/2017 11:00:00 AM
Hi Laura. The battle of darkness and light is a daily thing and can really only be won with the help of God. I enjoyed reading this one. God be with you, my friend..... Robert.
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Laura Hay
Date: 2/7/2017 8:44:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed this Robert. I appreciate you stopping to read this. Warm regards, Laura.
Date: 6/24/2015 7:32:00 AM
An intelligent, deeply perceptive write, dear Laura. May you always remain in the light and emerge victorious from all the life battles still to be fought. A 7. hugs!
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Laura Hay
Date: 6/24/2015 10:47:00 AM
Many thanks for taking the time to drop by and for the positive comments too Kim, much appreciated, warm rgds, Laura.
Date: 6/18/2015 6:26:00 PM
I rate this very expressive write a very solid 7. From Darkness into the Light is a great feat and one some fail to ever make. Defeat does not win if we step into the Light(God's) for there it can not exist.
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Laura Hay
Date: 6/19/2015 1:04:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments and for taking the time to stop by and read my poem, kind Rgds, Laura
Date: 6/15/2015 10:15:00 PM
I like how part two is so positive. A very interesting write, Laura!
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Laura Hay
Date: 6/19/2015 1:06:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate your time and positive feedback, warm rgds, Laura
Date: 6/11/2015 4:55:00 PM
I give a 7rating to this expressive poem, Laura. Like how you move on from the darkness of defeat to the light of positivity. Defeated, but not dead...hope can be the saving factor. Well done. // paul
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Laura Hay
Date: 6/12/2015 5:14:00 AM
Thank you very much Paul, always appreciate your time and encouragement! I like to write finishing on a positive - it is postitive thinking that has and still gets me through the chaos of my mind and life in general. Kind Rgds, Laura

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