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The Daddy Soldier

At four years old she kissed him goodbye In his splendid soldier’s uniform She was saddened to see her mother cry As he set off for a land that’s foreign She didn’t understand the reasons Why her Daddy had to go She only knew it was a soldier’s duty Because her Daddy had told her so By five years old she had forgotten his smell From the after-shave when he gave her a kiss She had gotten used to life without Dad But by her mother, every day he was missed Today her father came home Though it wasn’t a day full of smiles He would be traveling in a wooden box Across the many miles Six soldiers carried him off of the plane With an American flag draped over the top She watched the tears flow from Mommy’s eyes As if they’d never stop She stood up and she saluted them The way her Daddy had shown Not completely cognizant Of the eternity of his new home When Daddies of little children Die for some vague political cause Every living human being Should stop in thoughtful pause In wars there are no winners Just some who loose much more Victory has hollow meaning When Daddy dies when you are four

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2011 1:19:00 PM
Joe, this was a very moving and meaningful poem to me. My dad's plane fell out of the sky when I was 4. Nothing ever found of it. It was 1951. Check out my tribute to him - A Little Hill In Arlington or MIA Hill or Daddy's Coming Home.
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Date: 5/6/2011 8:07:00 AM
Sad but true, Joe. Outstanding piece. Really grabs at ones heartstrings. Kudos to you. Great job. Ralph
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Date: 5/6/2011 7:14:00 AM
Taking any glory out of war, and putting a real face on what and who make the true sacrifices. Just beautifully written, Joe. `
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Date: 5/5/2011 10:23:00 PM
:( What can I say! ....Pass me the tissue box! halas too much of a reality for many soldiers' family. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 5/5/2011 6:28:00 PM
So very true, surely a winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 5/5/2011 2:44:00 PM
NIcely done, JOe. If ONLY the world's leaders could understand the harm they are doing. But they care nothing for anyone but themselves!
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:02:00 PM
I always told you Joe, no one tells a story like you, I am brushing tears away for this one, you are one amazing storyteller, and how many times has this same scene happened, well done~~
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Date: 5/5/2011 10:50:00 AM
this was very nicely written, it had a good flow and told a nice story. cory
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Date: 5/5/2011 10:19:00 AM
gut wrenching yet so beautifully expressed with so much human spirit in every line... wonderful wonderful!, joe... i can relate; my dad was a general and passed on early.. :) huggs , nette
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