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The Cutter and Mr Indifference

she was granite jealous sick of it all his drifting eye yellowing indifference the secretive calls so while he slumbered she cut it off she cut it off with a giggling swipe like a rabid cat in a back ally fight but come morning nothing had changed he hadn't noticed one blasted thing the new flowered blouse the whitened teeth fresh pot of coffee clumps of hair in the sink she cut it off and dyed...it all for the love of Mr.Indifference

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Date: 4/9/2017 6:45:00 PM
Visions of Lorena popped into my head as i read this.....and then....LAUGHTER....GUT BUSTING LAUGHTER.....Thanks for entering the contest Anthony
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Date: 12/23/2016 9:27:00 AM
You got me - I thought for sure the jewels were severed! This is off the wall fun to me. Your choice of words in some cases is ultra interesting. A real eye opener, Anthony ... CayCay
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Date: 10/17/2016 9:10:00 PM
This poem really caught me attention. Great message within the reading along with the format. Keep it up!
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Date: 10/15/2016 9:17:00 PM
Anthony this poem is so clever. I am sure you knew where most of our minds would go and yes mine went there. You're ending is classic and I loved it! Bravo! 7 ; )
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