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The Coppertone Girl

There once was a girl In the Coppertone ad And her dog pulled her bathing suit down; So her pale little butt Was exposed by the mutt Though the rest of her body looked brown. It was harmless and sweet And offensive to none So for years it made Coppertone's name; But society's changed And for people deranged What was innocent's not quite the same. Now the Coppertone girl, While her doggie still tries To perform the same stunt he once did, Looks abashed, but for what? For this time he had not Been successful at making his bid. Though his little teeth nip At her suit, he cannot Bare her tush for the whole world to see. It's a sign of the times That because of some crimes What was cute once no longer can be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/28/2016 8:33:00 PM
ahhh, so true, so sadly true, Ilene. Clever as always!!
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Date: 6/28/2016 6:59:00 PM
A 7 for this great poem that tells the truth about the changing times! I'm adding this one to my favorites. Janice
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Date: 6/27/2016 3:42:00 PM
Yes, I remember the ad. You wrote about an aspect of societal norms changing well, dear. Hope all is well. hugs
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Date: 6/27/2016 3:19:00 PM
love the witty angle of your work, and a strong ending that makes me look back at young adulthood... very nice, ilene.. huggs
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Date: 6/27/2016 3:17:00 PM
This is very nice...a warm feeling when reading. ;)
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Date: 6/27/2016 2:57:00 PM
Made me smile Ilene - oh how times have changed!:-) hugs Jan xx
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