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The Color of Money

What of the love when green is gone? When autumn’s chill brings rainbow hues. So delicate the weathered stems,that break with just the slightest breeze. Beware the towering evergreens with mulch about their roots. fragile autumn leaves fall upon a waveless pond… refugees in boats

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Date: 12/10/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thought provoking, David! Congrats!
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Date: 12/10/2016 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations David :)
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Date: 10/14/2015 9:54:00 PM
David, Congratulations on your win **SKAT**
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Date: 10/12/2015 5:20:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win david!
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Date: 10/9/2015 2:00:00 PM
Very nice David. Enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 9/19/2015 8:45:00 AM
ohh, i am smitten... beautiful, david!.. huggs
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Date: 9/18/2015 12:24:00 AM
this is much shorter than some Ive read, but I like it very much. I really like the prose part. BG
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Date: 9/16/2015 3:18:00 PM
An excellent Haibun, David; the colour green is truly prominent; love the end haiku. #7 ~ paul
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