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The coldest day

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The coldest day

waking up with dismay
window glasses frozen
house turns into freezer

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  1. Date: 1/16/2011 4:06:00 PM
    As always, nice haiku with nice images, Noriko

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 12:47:00 PM
    Hi Nokko! Great haiku:) I really enjoyed reading this... Carol

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 4:57:00 AM
    a very good description of the coldness around you. I would awake in such dismay if it was that cold around me, Jancarl

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 4:42:00 AM
    Good one very descriptive and expressive about this wintery blast..Enjoyed ..Sara