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The City and the River

City becomes joy, gathers hope, together concrete and man spiral, infusing life, aspirations endless. Continuing journey unfolds gradually; individuality lost and found and found and lost. Roots pulsing, always expanding; slums persisting by negated wealth— poetry written. Invoking rain, civilisation assimilates ~River~ assimilates civilisation. Rain invoking written poetry. Wealth negated by persisting slums expanding always. Pulsing roots lost and found and found and lost. Individuality gradually unfolds journey continuing. Endless aspirations —life infusing—spiral man and concrete together; hope gathers. Joy becomes City.
--------------------------------------------- Form: Palindrome Date : 10 /25 / 2016 Original Contest Entry: My kind of Town

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Date: 11/11/2016 8:43:00 PM
Congrats, Tamal!
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/11/2016 11:48:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. :)
Date: 11/11/2016 6:51:00 PM
Hi Tamal, I enjoyed the poem and the form. Congratulations on your win: -) Alexis
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/11/2016 11:50:00 PM
Thank you Alexis. :)
Date: 11/11/2016 4:21:00 PM
Really interesting piece here Tamal, pleased to have read and enjoy, also congratulations'
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/12/2016 4:26:00 AM
Thank you Joe, I am glad you liked it! :)
Date: 11/11/2016 6:52:00 AM
WOW!!!! The imagery is rich, together with the mirror-effect of your piece!!! Congrats Tamal, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/11/2016 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Teddy! In a way this is just a love letter to my beloved City of Joy.
Date: 11/10/2016 12:21:00 PM
wow! dear Tamal, nicely done unique format poem!Congrats on your win!//love,Anu:)
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/10/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thank you. :)
Date: 11/10/2016 11:34:00 AM
Very interesting way to do a poem. I like the form and what you did with it. Congratulations and thanks for being in the contest.
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/10/2016 11:40:00 AM
And thank you for hosting it, Janis! :) Have a great weekend ahead.

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