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The City

The City Brazen horns protest each others presence Steam rises from beneath the tarnished streets Taxis tease with flags that say "off duty' And in the shadows grifters ply their trade A cacophony of smells assault the senses Windows dressed up to seduce the eye Breezes brush against you with a stale breath Cracked sidewalks yielding to your tread Isolation in a sea of people Buildings clinging tightly to each other Sirens scream the news of unknown victims The city owns your soul, it lives inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/18/2011 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/18/2011 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 11/16/2011 5:40:00 AM
i enjoyed this poem but want to rise to the city's defense - i see all the negatives you so beautifully describe but for whatever reason, the city inspires me and keeps me going. really nice poem, though!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/16/2011 6:43:00 AM
It's all in the eye of the beholder isn't it Ilene. I am sure you are not the only one inspired by the city. Thanks for reading me.
Date: 11/16/2011 2:57:00 AM
congrats ~LUV*SKAT
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/16/2011 6:43:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 8/13/2011 6:17:00 PM
Terrific write mate...with love...old jack
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/15/2011 10:01:00 AM
Appreciate it Jack
Date: 8/13/2011 12:24:00 PM
gut wrenching in a style dazzling with expressive imagery, bob.... strife so well-described! :) huggs, nette
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/13/2011 2:40:00 PM
Thanks nette. Appreciate your supportive comments.

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