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The Christmas Card

Christmas day so full of joy, putting a smile on my face. Inspiring your eldest boy with love. I say grace I am fortunate to have a mother like you. No matter the distance between us, Your love will shine through. You've made me what I am today. Molded me into Asavvy man. Being there, supporting my dreams. Doing everything you can. I say thank you Mom, for all that you have done. My muse, my backbone, my mother, I love you. Sincerely, Your eldest son...... Jared Pickett Asavvy1 12/18/05

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Date: 12/9/2009 7:12:00 AM
Nice tribute to your Mom....Dad
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:53:00 AM
My mom is a strong force in my life. She is a great mother and wife. I definitely can relate to this one. It seems like your mom is a great woman.
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Date: 11/14/2009 10:03:00 PM
I wish my son would write a poem like yours. I know your Mom is proud of you too. Beautiful poem here, Jared. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/13/2009 3:06:00 PM
What a beautiful loving tribute,to the best person in the world-Mum,and though distance can seperate our loved ones,in heart is were we are so close,lovely,and i love Christmas Day,my favorite Day of the year,and this poem a fav too--excellent--Charma
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Date: 11/13/2009 1:38:00 PM
Wow I wish my son would write to me like that! If you could please..with sugar on top..write me a Concrete poem for my contest I would be very happy! perhaps a candy cane? or candy corn? hmmm I'm hungry! Light & Love
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Date: 11/13/2009 12:10:00 AM
Nice tribute Jared and thank you for your encouragement today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/12/2009 9:17:00 PM
Great work just as fresh as the day you wrote it. Words never die and you immortalized your mom in a beautiful verse...Raul
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Date: 11/12/2009 8:28:00 PM
Ok. You have jumped to a position of a favorite for me. Beautiful poem of dedication to your mother goes to my fav. poem. Who is Asavvy man? I guess I'll just have to keep on reading to find out? Thanks for sharing, Caroline.
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Date: 11/12/2009 6:00:00 PM
Your going to make your mother's heart sing with this beautifully written poem for her. They say a good man honors his mother's heart. She is lucky to have you with her!Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/12/2009 5:34:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to Momma Jared. Pleases me greatly, your write expressing your honor, love for the one who bore you into this world. I owe all my own backbone to my Mother's stand for the things that mean something in this old world. Sincerely, my friend, Moses
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Date: 11/12/2009 3:56:00 PM
This is lovely, any mother would love to read such wonderful words from her son! (You have a lucky Mom!) :) Carrie
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Date: 11/12/2009 2:04:00 PM
Very thoughtful of a son to care for his mother in a manner to write her a poem. Thanks for your comments on my work it is encouraging. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/12/2009 1:05:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to your mother. Such an uplifting poem, one that any mom would cherish. Thank you for sharing this day brightener with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 11/12/2009 12:13:00 PM
Rousing tribute to your Mom.. Mom's are special.. nice flow of words... strong and touching verses ... thankxxx for sharing... keep at it.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" many thankxxx for your comments on November Storm ...
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