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The Castle

In the mist of the Scottish countryside Where clouds touch the lofty hills Stands a castle on a shores edge Rocks and mortar laid by hand Cobblestone pathway over the bridge Centuries of footsteps preceded Once kings and nobles walked in grace Now is only one persons place Out upon the Loch winter would arrive Cold wind and frozen ice gather The castle walls would keep out the frost In spring ice would jam up against the rock As early heather blooms upon the rocky shore Winter gathered it's coat of white As crocus and tulips now grasp the sun Summer's new grass shoots come alive To the rhythm of the soft warm winds The seasons come and the seasons go In all weather the castle remains firm A landmark for centuries will stand This castle made to withstand the test of time. 4/19/14

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Date: 5/21/2014 4:04:00 PM
Dear Phyllis, I'm sure the people who built these durable castles had no idea they would last for centuries. Can't help but think how flimsy our dwellings are today compared to these castles. Awesome poem, dear! If I get to the UK in October, I want to see castles just like the one you described here. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2014 2:17:00 PM
Fine poem about the wonderful Eilean Donan Castle, which is about 80 minutes drive from where I stay. It's a shame your husband doesn't fly, as it's a terrific part of Scotland to visit. James :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/19/2014 2:35:00 PM
A beautiful area that I would love to drive thru. Love the photos you post. Yes wish my husband would fly but he will not even get a passport. stubborn ole fool lol
Date: 4/25/2014 9:33:00 PM
I like the eerie mystery of the centuries old castles. Very descriptive and ull of fine imagery
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/19/2014 2:34:00 PM
thank you Karen
Date: 4/24/2014 5:21:00 PM
seems like some poets are practicing their novel writing skills, this would make a great page for a book. and maybe for the first time has me thinking of going this way too. sorry i haven't been a round new job is working me silly. john
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/19/2014 2:34:00 PM
thank you John
Date: 4/21/2014 4:33:00 PM
love this wonderfully descriptive piece, Phyl. hope you had a great Easter x
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/19/2014 2:33:00 PM
thank you
Date: 4/20/2014 3:10:00 PM
great poem phyllis, well enjoyed
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/19/2014 2:33:00 PM
thank you
Date: 4/20/2014 5:02:00 AM
The poem brought my memories of travel in Scotland years ago, phyllis
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/19/2014 2:32:00 PM
thank you
Date: 4/19/2014 11:33:00 PM
I loved this, you make me wish to go, I have been all over the world, and yet still haven't made it back to where I am from!!!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/21/2014 12:04:00 PM
I would love to travel but so far it has only been Canada and the U.S My husband will not fly so we are limited to where we go. Now he will not even get a passport so we travel Canada. Yes i have my passport but have not used it since I got it.
Date: 4/19/2014 9:16:00 PM
GREAT writing, PHyllis. So nice to see you here today with this new poem. I really liked that line: to the rhythm of warm winds. I think that is you longing for the summertime after this most terrible winter. Is this a castle in a picture or one nearby where you live?
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/21/2014 12:05:00 PM
thanks my friend. I am longing for summer as you know we have had such a long winter. Still a bit of snow on the ground. It is the castle James Fraser posts on face book
Date: 4/19/2014 5:10:00 PM
Some building stand for a very long time for sure as do some family lines..Enjoyed reading your creative work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I hope that the upcoming Easter Sunday will be all that you could hope for and more besides..Sara
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/21/2014 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Sara for your comments. Easter was great spent with the kids and grandkids. Nothing better than that.
Date: 4/19/2014 3:09:00 PM
- Strange to think of ..... year after year .... People are born and people die ... - Song and dance ... war and blood ... the castle standing there so old and proud! - A very well written poem my friend Phyllis. - BUT ...... now you need to stay healthy ...... Spring is coming!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/21/2014 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise

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