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The Carousel

I remember riding the carousel when so very young, the ride slowly going round in circles but a lot of fun, then as a teenager with my first boyfriend, we sat on a different horse time and time again, Then with my husband we both held on tight, the carousel picked up a little more speed to my delight, next thing I knew there I was with my two young sons, my sons having a ball as the carousel took another run, Before I knew it my husband and I were both middle-aged, the carousel going a bit faster like in a passing parade, whereas I will be fighting old age with each new dawn, the ride more likely a blur like the words to an old song, To the carousel of life I have one more request, to slow down a bit until I draw my very last breath… 11-19=16

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Date: 11/23/2016 2:55:00 AM
I agree w/Heidi, an enjoyable ride, Cheryl. A lovely metaphor for life you used in this poem. Very creative, very true. I want that carousel to pick up the speed a bit, I'm a thrill seeker. LOL! Love the poem though. Many blessings of love to you, lady.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/23/2016 9:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Freddie the thrill seeker, lol! I don't know about you but it seems like time goes faster as we get older…:)
Date: 11/20/2016 7:08:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one Cheryl! Well done.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/20/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi; I'm a little dizzy after writing this one, lol!:)

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