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The Camouflage Had Spoken

You said there was a miss when I dwell within your recesses You said there was a timeless when we ran into a quest Chanting soul written on the piece of paper As I believed lost be spoken bluntly in its verses Chanted the insecurity Uttered solely within the gust of melancholy You say we are the world We are the future and past Camouflage finally revealed by the courtesy silence of yours Your words which dispossessed by reality and not materialize by the time Your words which led to nothing but vain on a rhyme Now we simply deprecated Like dusts rippled on a flat surface atop the old album As easy as it forgotten by you To forget about who you are, who I am To forget about the holder of the past And now the throne is all yours If time willingly to sacrifice its seconds And roll back its ages wheels to the day of my times I'd grab the vision where I stood and gazed upon this time ************************************************************** 3rd PLACE November's poem Contest Judged: 11/26/2012 Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A **************************************************************

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Date: 12/3/2012 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Yanny. Love, Carol
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/3/2012 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Carol, your comment is always uplifting :)
Date: 11/29/2012 6:00:00 PM
a well crafted poem that you put a lot of thought into, Yanny. Congrats on the big win.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/3/2012 3:38:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, you make my day :D
Date: 11/27/2012 2:49:00 PM
Hey...first time reading your work! Congrats on this personifying piece! Keep working on that beautiful English! WOW! gwendolen
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/27/2012 4:05:00 PM
Thank you gwendolen, it's a pleasure for having you too in here, i'm going to check your page too after this :)-Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/27/2012 9:02:00 AM
Wow! You really write so well and a great poem indeed my dear Yanny! I love it and I extremely enjoy reading it tonight. My huge hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend! Cheers! thank you so much also for your precious time reading my poems, your wonderful comments and congratulations. All the best and luck always! love and hugs, Leonora
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/27/2012 4:02:00 PM
Thank you leonara, you are really delighten my day by stopping by and leaving some lovely comment :D,wishing you a wonderful day :)-Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/27/2012 1:37:00 AM
Big congratulations on your winning place Yanny, hugs xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/27/2012 2:40:00 AM
Thank you Mandy,it's been a pleasure to have a greeting by you :D
Date: 11/26/2012 9:39:00 PM
Yanny, . Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry..always~pd
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/26/2012 10:01:00 PM
Thank you PD, you're really make my day :D- Love&Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/17/2012 4:30:00 PM
Great Poetry.. so much like your style... hugs Michael
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/17/2012 6:15:00 PM
Thank you michael, glad that you like it :) - Hug, Yanny
Date: 11/17/2012 12:56:00 AM
Love it, very well written
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/17/2012 3:44:00 AM
Thank you Amber, glad that you like it :). Wished you a great holidays ^^- Hug, Yanny

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