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The Callous Hand of Friendship

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The Callous Hand of Friendship

Take my hand, understand, that I have infringed my brain in depth
To try to help you affix the scattered pieces you penned
Your tongue rattles like autumn leaves in a wind storm
Causing my peace to be buried in a coffin with one worm
I am past the point of anger where darkness did reside
Would you like to play now? Please don't hide..
On a path nearby you will find him
Silent- as he has removed from his butt the embedded burr which infringed
As he walks the nightingale calls again
For it is not my wish but just revenge
When I say softly "yes, I'm your friend"

Trick or Treat Johnny Rhinem... LOL

For Contest: Everything Halloween
September 28, 2013

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  1. Date: 10/1/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Very good write

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 6:03:00 PM
    Oh, Cindy. It's trick or treat, alright :). Have a great Sunday!

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 3:49:00 PM
    this is awesome-Skat

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 12:31:00 AM
    This is a good poem. I wish you luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 7:03:00 PM
    I've enjoyed your light hearted poetry Cindy, hope all is well, hugs for you xxx

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 6:28:00 PM
    † Sigh Said The Sailor Chuckie, Whileas Searching For His Long Lost Duckie, And There 'Cross Her Meadow Blue, Rode His Headless Horseman With His Crimson Crew, In Pursuit Of Yes Her Queen's, Winnie 'Pon Pooh *:* Smile, Love It Baby Girl, Your Friend Always, John

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    Date: 9/28/2013 6:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm glad that you took this well. LOL Thanks.. LOL Your friend, Lucinda