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The Butcher's Show

he called it raw, or something rare. i called it overkill. strike, like lightning-tips murder and naivety, tight-lipped, bloody entertainment for you and for your hands. it will smell, and stain your stripes, drip like falling bullets which melt long before it kills. you called it routine, i called it tight-lipped, bloody, entertainment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/11/2009 6:32:00 AM
This is bloody excellent poetry. I am not taken much with lower-0case writting but I think that you have re-enforced the power of the words by using such a device. Whilst the overall impact of the poem is militant, it maintains a beautiful aesthetic that lends itself to the writings of dome of the better poets from the second Harlem school. Brilliant poem my friend!
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Date: 5/9/2009 5:12:00 PM
A militant advocate for the silent, I see ... only applause for power and write. Love
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