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They all got on my bus The old folk had a night out The cinema it would be 50 shades of grey Going to see 50 shades of grey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/28/2015 10:00:00 PM
Oh but I was so sure I already made a comment on this one! I asked you to post about of how they looked like after they came out of the movie, and it must be with a tetra-pixel colored pic! A 7 for your humor, sire...:D Kim
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/28/2015 10:05:00 PM
That's weird because I remember you did comment, I read it, I thought I was going crazy, but I think sometimes comments are disappearing. I think they looked the same, very happy indeed!!!!
Date: 2/26/2015 9:05:00 PM
Very nice play on words...A lovely picture....nicely done
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/28/2015 10:06:00 PM
Thanks Joseph!
Date: 2/25/2015 8:21:00 PM
Haha
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 8:56:00 PM
Did I make you smile maybe?
Date: 2/25/2015 5:01:00 AM
- Memories ...... happy days !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 8:56:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/24/2015 2:22:00 PM
hahaha. you are hilarious with your poems, Arthur!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 8:55:00 PM
either funny or dark or a twist of both!
Date: 2/24/2015 2:22:00 PM
by the way it's a great movie! Grey or no grey.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 8:54:00 PM
Other than hearing the title I admit I do not know much about it! Thanks Andrea
Date: 2/24/2015 8:46:00 AM
LOL LOL :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 8:54:00 PM
:)
Date: 2/24/2015 7:57:00 AM
I love this one, Arthur....what I call serious humour. That black & white photo gives you a big helping hand, too; I'm sure this photo was taken after the film:) // paul
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 8:53:00 PM
And here I thought my poem was helping the photo!!!!
Date: 2/24/2015 7:45:00 AM
Love it Arthur. LOL
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/25/2015 8:52:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 2/23/2015 1:37:00 PM
Haha
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/23/2015 2:58:00 PM
:)
Date: 2/23/2015 11:02:00 AM
A short but interesting read.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/23/2015 2:58:00 PM
Thanks!!!!
Date: 2/23/2015 8:48:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I can just see all their faces after they see the movie. A 7 I love your write. Blessings dear friend
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/23/2015 2:58:00 PM
Thank you Eve!!!
Date: 2/23/2015 7:22:00 AM
Is this picture before or after the movie??? Check out my latest.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/23/2015 2:56:00 PM
On my way!!!! :)
Date: 2/23/2015 5:16:00 AM
They will be shocked, and in the homeward bus there will be a buzz of complaints. Hugs, Alicia, xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/23/2015 2:55:00 PM
Oh you never know, some may surprise you!!!! Old people are just young people in Old clothes!!!!!
Date: 2/23/2015 1:32:00 AM
ha ha ha - that reminds me I must colour my hair:-) Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/23/2015 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Jan!

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