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The Burial Place

Casually, and out of no where My best friend turned to me and said: Of coming death I've no fear Just bury me in Port Charlotte when I'm dead Why there, I asked, a child, An old forgotten flame went before you Why not Jamaica's tropic wild Why has southwest Florida so allured you? None of those, none of those, She told me, have you ever seen The family plot that I will lose It's a quiet remote woodland scene A dense bush of animal sounds A dark place even at top of day Where loneliness still abounds O let me not dead in a dead place lay. I am a child of civilization I like the music and the lights The sound of feet, commotion Of the cars, party through the nights Port Charlotte cemetery meets The bill, there is a church near And a school, and always busy streets At nights the clubs are never drear Bury me where the party goes on She said, and I amused, smiled And swallowed every question So did not her composure spoiled For shall the dead enjoy all that Or mingle with us again, vain dream But I'll keep my broom lest some bat Dare try to make my children scream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/7/2010 7:54:00 AM
I love the sentiments expressed here David, and feel exactly the same way about 'laying where the party goes on' . A very enjoyable visit, and many thanks for your warming comments. Gordon, (hicky)
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Date: 10/6/2010 5:51:00 PM
You are such an easy favorite on my list David, but I fear 'favorite' doesn't do you justice. I shall pretend there is a number 1 next to your name from here on out!
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Date: 10/6/2010 3:59:00 PM
David, your poems often give me chills. They are so honest and perfectly presented. This is positively brilliant! I like the way she thinks of keeping her broom to keep bats away from her children after she dies. Port C. is nice, but I want my ashes scattered in the Gulf of Mexico to feed the fish. As you know,I am on the road. Drove 550 miles today and am in N.C. tonight. Should reach my sister's in NJ this coming weekend. Can't wait to rest my eyes. Thanks and love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:16:00 AM
You have created a very nice pen picture of your friend and why to be buries in a particular place, enjoyed the humor in the last part. David
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