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The Build Up To a Fallen Dream

My ASPIRATIONS were TOUCHING the sky! NOTHING could stop the way this would FLY! EVERYTHING was on track...or so it did seem- but.... "It Was The Build Up To A Fallen Dream!" My VISION was FURTHER than the eye could see Nothing...there was NOTHING that was going to STOP me! Of ALL the crops of ideas.... "THIS WAS THE CREAM"- but.... "It Was The Build Up To A Fallen Dream!" My PURPOSE had meaning on ROCK solid ground! It was DESIGNED on the basis to be SAFE and sound! NO better motive could there be NOR a theme- but.... "It Was The Build Up To A Fallen Dream!" The DRIVE was INTENSE and driven to SUCCEED! I COVERED all my bases-what MORE would I need? It was TAKING OFF with a FULL head of steam- but.... "It Was The Build Up To A Fallen Dream!" My ASPIRATIONS, my VISIONS, my PURPOSE and my DRIVE- ALL of these made me feel SO alive!!! THIS WAS THE PINNACLE.... the ULTIMATE SUPREME.... alas.... "It Was The Build Up To A Fallen Dream!" (WTA-IV)

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Date: 3/2/2016 12:13:00 PM
- Dreams needs time, sometimes they need to rest and be a little more powerful - Sometimes we do not understand what the dream will tell us - Some dreams are never meant to become reality - A great poem, Walter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 3/2/2016 4:20:00 PM
Anne-Lise, your words carry helpful insight and the point is to "realize our dreams" (thank you from your poem)
Date: 3/1/2016 3:00:00 PM
You know what's been said,"The best laid plans of mice and men often go awry " really like the poem, Walter. Sorry it didn't work out.
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 3/1/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Daniel! A door closing does allow for the opening of another... We must stay open and ready for ALL opportunities! Thank you!

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