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The Breakdown

for every step that he takes forward he feels like he's losing he's losing so much more standing up for what he believes is right he plants both of his feet, as he struggles to fight he struggles from within as his lungs gasp for air he loves her but she hardly realizes that he's there so he's lead by her indecisiveness once again but she doesn't care and he breaks down yeah, she breaks down Open your eyes and stop believing these ignominous lies she's just the air the he continues to breathe he's just the rumor that she wanted to believe he breaks down she breaks down they breakdown he sits there hiding all of his pain he puts on his disguise and lives life unchanged but on the inside he breaks down his thoughts of constant losing her ways are so confusing and he hates the way she's using him so he breaks down Breakdown, her constant apprehension, it must be a given, because she hates the way she's living, so she breaks down, yeah, she breaks down

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Date: 11/13/2009 1:06:00 PM
Sad write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/13/2009 5:53:00 AM
...now if only i could breath....Always, Rain Keetly
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Date: 11/12/2009 4:51:00 PM
Very interesting lyric, Logan. An apparent peaceful surface but we face so many inner struggles. That's what we call Life I guess. Thank you for your comment on my "Roulette". Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/12/2009 4:43:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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