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The Bomber and the Bombshell

She broke down Like a Ford in a storm Anything to garner a reaction Who could resist that pretty little red dress, Soaked, and covered in oil? Not anyone I knew, And I knew myself well. I slowed to a lame dog's pace to get a better look As she pulled a rusty iron From a burlap bag in the boot. She very well coulda been Holding a Bible She looked so sorry. I changed in a phone booth Quick like the wind to her back And flew in on my red n' blues. A bomber makes a fine umbrella For a roadside Stella. And, by starlight she watched An artist in his element. She did her best to shield me With our leather lean-to As my hands made Their way under the skirt Of the broke lady; Handled with a delicate firmness Only experience can bestow. I knew what I was doing. Graciousness was God's gift To her it seemed, As she lit a cigarette to Spite the rain And pressed it to my lips; my hands were spoken for. A look and a smile Was all I could muster as The deluge made quiet The victorious purr The old beast let out in relief. "Thanks" with a kiss to my cheek Was the moment I knew. She scurried off to slam the door Before I realized she was gone. I was gonna miss that jacket.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/2/2013 11:24:00 AM
was this for the leather jacket contest? if so it is an excellent entry.
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Date: 8/1/2013 11:00:00 AM
Congratulation on being featured. Excellent poetry poet.
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:18:00 AM
"tremendously awesome........... congrats!!! SKAT"
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:48:00 AM
Great poem. Told a nice little story. Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/22/2013 12:39:00 PM
you are an awesome poet... sad to know your comfort shell is gone... thank you.. for the comment...LINDA
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Date: 6/22/2013 12:37:00 PM
Hello Andy, "Welcome to the poetry soup. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest -- I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer on this site. Please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far.. Hoping to become a follower and a friend to your poems, and persona. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 6/20/2013 12:52:00 PM
Hmmm.. interesting and passionate read with lots of innuendo's. Welcome to P/Soup.
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Andy Ellsworth
Date: 6/20/2013 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Kim! Feedback appreciated.
Date: 6/20/2013 8:56:00 AM
Good morning Andy, wow.... this is a nice poem, I seen a contest about a jacket, hopefully you check out the contest page, and enter your awesome poem. I give it a perfect 7. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Andy Ellsworth
Date: 6/20/2013 1:13:00 PM
Wow, thanks so much SKAT. I'm honored to have you on my team. I'm on my way to check out your work.
Date: 6/20/2013 5:07:00 AM
Hey, Andy ! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Andy Ellsworth
Date: 6/20/2013 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Anne. I love your piece on coffee... mmm.

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