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The Blues

Withering of life bit by bit, A skinny man tumbles with hunger, Poverty , a blue ! Burning off obesity bit by bit, Treadmill to a man's excess, Richness , a blue ! Written on 13/3/14

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Date: 3/13/2014 11:54:00 AM
very striking contrast // paul
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Date: 3/13/2014 7:27:00 AM
Total opposites but both can bring their own blues..Great work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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