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THE BLUE MOON Shimmer does it not this inspirational ivory opal, Lightly dinted with a thin sheen of aquatic blue, Illuminations elliptical transparent veil, a drapery Suspended by heavens orbiting web called gravity! Shingles tacked in by star nails, fastened against The back drop of a vast blackened universe of mystery, A mystical painting ever changing, a masterpiece Created by the divine everlasting, the mood ring Of inspirational thoughts glittering in the timeless Sea of space! Melting frozen ice jewels collide against the fire Rudy Of the inner suns blaze, as the showering solar dust Bursts forth falling into the cup of the big dippers crystal Alignment, amongst the opulent elegance shown in the Brilliance of the blue moon! Let tranquilitY's cooling pools runith over in softness Peace of serenity, I’ll bath within its optical illusions Of beauty, a transcended spirit seeking freedoms Dream escape beyond mine own earthly foot hold Of reality! A spinning cosmonaut existing in a lunar environment, Dangling in a spiritual orbit of the heightened experience, Destinies castaway swaying within the universal pull of Brilliance, a mystical rose captured within a comets Tail end of discovery! Hail that man in the moon, for I wish to be consumed Within this elliptical titan for which he lives upon, So close almost to be able to touch by mine own Mortal imagination, yet by reason the distance Is just too great, I’m unable to bridge this vastness! Inspirations muse this prisoner of the earth bound, Let the shades of illusions not past me by this night Of elliptical excellence, merging this transcend Beneath the waves of light, to flex and bend Unto space itself, drowning within the depth Abyss beyond! Oh to become one drop of polar frozen ice, Floating within this bio-sphere of elliptical beauty, A tears silent frail hush, to fall against the face of the blue moons Passionate shine of night, in this single moment of liberation I’ve found The true peace of tranquility at last. BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN Dedicated to Mystic Rose whom Inspired this poem with her picture Of the blue moon! And Kathy Ling my moon gazer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/17/2015 8:52:00 AM
Fantastic poem, struck me with its deep and inspiring verses! Adding this gem to my fav list, thanks. A7
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Date: 8/11/2015 11:04:00 PM
very nice :)
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Date: 8/10/2015 2:24:00 AM
Enjoyed your creativity and poetical language, Cherl. Another beautiful offering from you. We are tempted by this blue moon to "bath within its optical illusions of beauty". Well done, and as usual, top marks to you! // paul
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Date: 8/6/2015 3:41:00 PM
Enjoyed this pure astral painting and rich imaginative moonscape Cheryl..'
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Date: 8/4/2015 6:29:00 PM
This is deep, Cherl, it moves and floats, draws in the reader, The Blue Moon, stunning and captivating. SO deep, your imaginations is amazing... Thank you so much for always inspiring the soul...LINDA
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Date: 8/3/2015 9:00:00 AM
Wow!!!! You penned this very great, your words flow smoothly and the description is very clear. Excellence.........A.M.
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Date: 8/3/2015 8:55:00 AM
lucid impressions of the moon so finely detailed, cherl... well done!..huggs
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Date: 8/3/2015 3:08:00 AM
Cherl, wow!! you certainly elevated what the blue is all about!!you mesmerized my eyes and thoughts!!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 8/3/2015 12:02:00 AM
Once in a blue moon you read a great poem about a blue moon! hugs
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Date: 8/2/2015 8:36:00 PM
Wow!! What beautiful pictures and your poem is so deep. Thank you.
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