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The Blazing Sun

Eileen  Manassian Avatar Eileen  Manassian - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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The Blazing Sun

You
And Me
Harmony
Love’s symphony
Blissful ecstasy 
A never ending song
That both of us sing along
Life’s battle are gallantly won
We merge our entities into one
A fusion outshining the blazing sun.

Eileen Manassian Ghali

PS...In an Etheree, each line is built around a syllable count starting from one syllable in line one, going to ten syllables in line ten. It has no meter and no rhyme, but I'm a rebel at heart..sue me! ;)

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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:18:00 PM
    I've done these before (though each time I write one they end up being a double etheree, which goes back down to one again). I liked that you didn't let the form dictate with what you wanted to say, but instead the form conformed with you... does that make any sense? but ANYway... great job anyhow! A poet invented these rules, so it's a poet that must break them as well :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 3:54:00 PM
    But are you a rebel with a cause Auntie. oooo waits for lecture lol. You did great job wth it though. Take care, Richard

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No lecture today....auntie is giving you the day off for good behavior! ;)
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:00:00 PM
    I bow to the rebels at heart! No lawsuits here! Just respect. :) Excellently done!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My favorite t-shirt while I was growing up??? One that had the words TROUBLE MAKER on the front! That was me. :) Thanks for the lovely lovely post, Drake! It brings me lots of joy! :)
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Eileen, Intensely passionate, nice !! Jag

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Jag. I'm glad you liked it! Love and passion...the key words in my life.
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 8:10:00 AM
    I like it.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :)
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:43:00 AM
    - It is absolutely beautiful, Eileen!! <3 <3 <3 - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 9:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    <3 <3 <3....thanks, sweet Anne Lise!
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:08:00 AM
    love a rebel, well done xx

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    SHEESH! Glad to KNOW that.... ;)
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/22/2013 9:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad to now that GOLDEN GIRL! :)