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THE BITTERSWEET OF ISRAEL
Angel stands guard ~ ready to save her child, her guiding eyes so wise in soft dark room. With psalms of life and love her song beguiled.* ~ Her feet would follow nigh, till the child’s tomb. Behold, this son, with beating heart of gold! Her guiding eyes so wise in soft dark room. ~ Is this the one foretold, the king of old? Angel, this cherub, with six wings, throws kiss. Behold, this son, with beating heart of gold! ~ This child will hurl all lies into abyss. Her fingers softly touch the savior’s cheek - Angel, this cherub, with six wings, throws kiss. ~ This Mary’s son will give strength to the weak. (The guards of Israel ~ their babes ~ they cry!)** Her fingers softly touch the savior’s cheek . ~ (And Herod seeks all babes – the weak, to die) Angel stands guard ~ ready to save her child. (The guards of Israel ~ their babes ~ they cry!) With psalms of life and love her song beguiled.
12/14/2016 Contest: Angels 1st Place *beguiled – filled with wonder and delight **guards – angels Stanza 4 line 2 & stanza 5 line 3 – 10 syllables/ poetry soup’s syllable counter inaccurate (just in case)

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Date: 1/5/2017 6:04:00 AM
Great write and win ...Congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2017 7:33:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 1/5/2017 5:09:00 AM
Wonderful piece well done great win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2017 7:34:00 AM
Thank you, Just James!
Date: 1/5/2017 3:20:00 AM
A wonderful write and win, Kim:) shine on with your pen:) many congratulations:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2017 7:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jo! :)
Date: 1/4/2017 11:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7 ; )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2017 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie! :)
Date: 1/4/2017 10:10:00 PM
A jewel of a poem. Congratulations on your trophy win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2017 7:35:00 AM
Thank you, Afzal! :)
Date: 1/4/2017 9:57:00 PM
Wonderful write, Kim, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2017 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! xo
Date: 1/4/2017 8:02:00 PM
So beautiful
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2017 8:42:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2017 8:42:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn :)
Date: 1/4/2017 5:26:00 PM
lovely and wonderful piece....Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest....Continue to fly high....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2017 5:35:00 PM
Thanks so much! :)
Date: 1/4/2017 4:43:00 PM
congrats on your win with this great poem stephen
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2017 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, Stephen! :)
Date: 1/4/2017 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations on top spot. It seems your efforts have been rewarded.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2017 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, Richard! :
Date: 12/17/2016 7:49:00 PM
Hi Kim we have not spoken, nice to meet you! Happy Holy Days! Please check my blog you are not getting the need for repeated lines, you have time & I can see you put a lot of work into this! Light & Love Debbie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2017 5:34:00 PM
So excited for first place! Thanks, Debbie! :):)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2016 10:54:00 PM
So I went to your blog and looked. Please help me to understand "you are not getting the need for repeated lines." Thanks, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2016 8:11:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie! Merry Christmas! I thought I had checked carefully. I will check it out. Still learning! I appreciate.
Date: 12/14/2016 10:17:00 PM
Wow! This is amazing, Kim! You have done a wonderful job on this poem! Good luck to you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2016 10:19:00 PM
Thank you, Rick!

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