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The Birth of Fall

The sound of thunder Rings through the cool autumn air Announcing the end Of the Summer's final breath And the coming of Fall's birth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/31/2010 5:39:00 AM
I like this..cause' I am sick of summer !! I have read all your poems today..great !!
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Date: 8/28/2010 5:19:00 PM
Excellent tanka, Larry. Great job. Ralph
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Date: 8/28/2010 8:53:00 AM
Like the comparison of thunder to summer's "final breath," Larry. A great tanka and I wish you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2010 7:37:00 AM
veracious and well written!
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Date: 8/27/2010 7:38:00 PM
nice one Larry, good luck in the contest
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