Get Your Premium Membership

The Big Top

When I was young, I wanted to run away to the circus. Then one day I realized the circus was life! Are we not the clown, the strongman, the freak, the daredevil? Is there not personal sorrow and the desperate search for pleasure? The flying trapeze man and woman are in love, and every performance, they risk the breaking of their heart. When one almost falls to their death, the audience cries out, and then claps even louder! The freak show is hidden in the back, though its location is well known to local politicians. Then to play the games on the midway, with its crooked carnies, rigged set ups, and worldly women. The city is 'the big top', its chaotic gyrations and jaded excitements, all part of the show. The grandstands are filled with 'television head' people, buzzing with excitement. See the eye of the tiger, hear the trumpet of that greatest of beasts, cowl at the jungle kings exclamation! Later that night, a young boy lying in bed, wonders if it was just a dream. Then, far off in the distance, a whispering growl was heard!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/24/2020 1:48:00 PM
Beautiful wit displayed in this first post. Congrats on your four-year anniversary, Meru
Login to Reply
Groen Avatar
Meru Groen
Date: 9/25/2020 8:18:00 PM
Thank You Line, Your So Kind.
Date: 8/24/2020 3:27:00 AM
Nice first post Meru.. This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
Login to Reply
Groen Avatar
Meru Groen
Date: 9/25/2020 8:20:00 PM
Thank You, you have been a great help.
Date: 10/25/2019 10:32:00 PM
meru, Glad to find this in your treasury. I like to rummage around backyards as well. But I don't always find gems like this. -Richard
Login to Reply
Groen Avatar
Meru Groen
Date: 2/17/2020 10:28:00 PM
Here again, you have made my day, I really appreciate it, Meru
Date: 5/8/2016 4:36:00 PM
Meru, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
Groen Avatar
Meru Groen
Date: 4/23/2017 1:48:00 PM
The light in your eyes, like the shine of stars, inspires the lonely heart, thank you for looking my way, Meru
Date: 5/8/2016 6:48:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Meru. :)
Login to Reply
Groen Avatar
Meru Groen
Date: 2/17/2020 10:29:00 PM
Thank you Moon Flower, for shining your light my way, Meru
Date: 5/7/2016 10:59:00 AM
meru groen, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things