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The Bee's Discovery

I have found it at last Flower told in legends past Its color vibrant as gold My furry body it will hold I have had no color since my birth This is the only color left on Earth Its yellow beauty is so bright Brighter than the noon sun’s light Now on my flower I must feed The flavor-filled pollen it will bleed ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is for a picture Abe Lopez asked me to write a poem on from Raul Moreno's pictures

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/23/2010 12:47:00 AM
This is still one of my favorite poems, you did an amazing job and I sneak in and read it from time to time...Raul
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Date: 9/23/2009 12:43:00 PM
Very descriptive writing here. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/22/2009 4:12:00 PM
Savannah I'm so proud of you and the work you are creating ..... this is a nicely written piece! Alopez====
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:45:00 PM
You did a first rate job!! Wonderful poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/22/2009 1:22:00 PM
Wow, I like the legend of the only colored flower. You did an amazing job, this one's for my fav's...Raul
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