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The Beauty Within

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The Beauty Within

Hidden in the nature the beauty within,
Upon the sky glaze into my eyes,
The beauty that rhymes inside my heart,
Beating to speak out loud and beyond,
To the world of unknown,
That runs throw each place of unsure,
Upon my eyes,
Tears by tears gain, 
Drop by drop,
Suddenly became the oceans depth.

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  1. Date: 7/23/2009 6:54:00 PM
    Very inspiring about the power within, thanks for sharing. Moses

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 2:33:00 AM
    Like your writing. Sara

  1. Date: 6/14/2009 12:16:00 AM
    Love the senryu in the last three lines Shirin.Thank you for your welcome comments on my poeting today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 6/13/2009 6:37:00 AM
    How very lovely this is. Excellent writing. Love Christie

  1. Date: 6/13/2009 4:26:00 AM
    yes Shirin! you have captured the 'essence' of the human spirit! lines 5 with 6 is SO true!!! really wonderful poem! Jim