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The Beauty of You and Me

I looked upon the ocean, Gandering at the sea, I began to notice, How it reflects you and me Life is just a mystery. You don’t see what goes on inside. All these forms of life That you don’t get from the outside. To notice the life that’s there – You have to go down deep Looking past all the bad – All the mess, all the heap. So next time you’re at the ocean – No matter you’re mess or your location. Remember to look out at the sea, And see the beauty of life Inside of you and inside of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/24/2015 4:49:00 PM
your strong imagery is about looking beyond our faults. We need to look a little deeper .
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Date: 9/9/2015 8:52:00 AM
Rose, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:32:00 PM
That's a wonderful first poem... ROSE, welcome to poetry soup....Linda
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Date: 9/10/2015 12:31:00 PM
PS.... Rose, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

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