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The Beautiful Star In My Night.(1)

I saw d stars and moon bow before your feet Istooped and wonder right then my heart begins to wonder and then i maevel at your beauty and the spectacular feature of your gaity Your blue eyes made me think i was in heaven but when i saw the moon and stars above me then i knew i was right in my paven your grandeur was glorious my behaivour was unsteady and right in your heart i knew you thought i was 'notorious' you lookedgorgious in your beautiful attire Iknew not what to say and i couldn't retire you walked close to me and for my name Iwas suprised because you cared less about fame I mumbled out Ga-bri-el and you said yours was Mabel .....watch out for the concluding part.

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Date: 4/13/2010 4:34:00 AM
Interesting story with romance that drew me in and am looking forward to the conclusion..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 4/9/2010 4:13:00 AM
interesting poem--enjoyed
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