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The Beautiful People

Spent some time today amongst the beautiful people In the downtown area of the big city Everybody rushing about oblivious to their surroundings Intent on doing what they set out to do Alone in their own little world Unaware of hundreds of people passing by Other people, each with their own agendas Heading to business meetings, wining and dining clients Clandestine meetings of secret lovers All happening before our very eyes When you live in the burbs, it can be a real eye opener Surely the clandestine meetings are going on here too But on a much smaller scale and a much less obvious manner I don't think it has really changed much over the years Other than just becoming more overt The rumour mill is most likely still churning But the sensationalism is missing It has become more routine Well spending time in the big city was a real eye opener Makes me appreciate my retirement life in the burbs A WHOLE LOT more! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 2/21/2014 6:59:00 PM
Yep....that's why I live in the sticks and don't come out...:-) nice one Jack
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/21/2014 9:25:00 PM
I'm with you babe! Couldn't wait to get home! Thank you my dear Donna! XOXOX
Date: 2/21/2014 6:22:00 AM
Dear Jack: Lovely read. Leon
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Date: 2/21/2014 7:07:00 AM
Thank you my good friend! Cheers!
Date: 2/21/2014 12:08:00 AM
Things are the same as in the past..and O guess it always be that way.Us human remain human.Loyalty and love is something we have to work hard for everyday.Its fsthe same everywhere on this planet.Sometimes its so easy for our instinct to ovrrcome reason and thought.
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Date: 2/21/2014 7:10:00 AM
Awww dear Charmaine! The more things change, the more they stay the same Loving hugs, Jack XOX
Date: 2/18/2014 5:03:00 PM
Living on a small Island I can so relate to this dear brother. I find if someone doesn't ask you outright what you are up to then the rumour mill starts lol Oh how narrow minded some folks are. love and hugs your cyber sister Jan xxxx
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Date: 2/18/2014 5:39:00 PM
It's the same the world over! Humans are humans! LOL Bro Jack loves ya XOXOXOX
Date: 2/18/2014 12:45:00 PM
Dragon sounds just like those beautiful people running around. with his own agenda. But Whoa! No clandestine meetings...Well, maybe, yes...if you call his meetings with all the awards committees for Hero of the Year" " Best dressed Dragon of the Year" He's trying to drum up support. He thinks humans are a bit dense to not have nominated him on his own. We'll all vote for him of course! But if he doesn't win, we'll stage our own award... "The Most News Worthy Dragon". He'll win of course!
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Date: 2/18/2014 5:36:00 PM
I knew Dragon would be able to relate to this one!!! Maybe a clandestine meeting with some female Dragon he hasn't told you about! LOL XOX
Date: 2/18/2014 10:20:00 AM
I would suppose that each person views his surroundings from his own perspective and is most comfortable in his own milieu...you have presented us with a well-worded point of view...thanks.
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Date: 2/18/2014 11:42:00 AM
Could have sat there for hours... very intriguing! Thank you my friend!
Date: 2/18/2014 9:26:00 AM
The same story with new characters. You write the truth.
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Date: 2/18/2014 11:41:00 AM
It was amazing sitting there watching the world go by! Have a great day my friend!
Date: 2/18/2014 9:12:00 AM
Very very good Jack, You pulled me into the poem. Nice Job......Roger
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/18/2014 11:40:00 AM
Was quite interesting observing all the busy people! Jack

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