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A Beacon of Hope

There is heavenly bliss in the sunrise And magic in the picturesque sunset, The grandmaster of spectacular shows the sun is the giver and the taker of life, The god of the ancient civilizations, The sentinel of our time The star of our world! The Answer contest by SKAT A

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2015 9:00:00 PM

I think you did a very good poem on the sun! Glad to see this one tonight.

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/20/2015 11:05:00 AM

Well, you are a beacon of hope!

Skat A

Date: 8/17/2015 11:19:00 PM

Abdul. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/3/2015 9:53:00 AM

Lovely!!! Good luck in the contest. I love writing about the sun...and the moon. I loved every line of this piece...especially the part of the sun being the sentinel. Great work.

Abdul Malik
Date: 8/3/2015 10:54:00 AM

Thanks Eileen. Appreciate your comments.