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The Bath

Breath laden islands rise and fall beneath the steam-graced surface of clear water, capped with rosettes, red-brown, silken, warm, beaded with water running in rivulets down hillsides of flesh, puddling, in the dark oval navel of desire. Water rises about kneecaps pristine and alabaster in hue. Angular shoulders hug the far end of the tub. A slender neck is held aloft, crowned with auburn hair and hazel eyes, changling orbs, of green and gold in an oval face rivaling Modigliani’s Madonna. A ruddy glow spreads across high cheekbones. The rising water submerges all, but the mounds and the porcelain neck with its upturned face, full, full of moans as tendrils, curl and coil splay upon the rocking water. Lids droop languidly, lips pout petulantly, as the water invades, buoying delicate arms, lending slip to fingertips, fingerstips ...avidly playing.. upon the pearl white key of desire.

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Date: 11/5/2011 10:50:00 PM
D.G.,;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/3/2011 9:20:00 PM
wow, splendid erotica, Debs!! Congratulations on your win. (first word omit e)
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Date: 11/3/2011 6:41:00 PM
Ah, the pearl white key to desire. I've been looking for one of those. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/3/2011 7:01:00 AM
Fine write,Debbie.Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest....
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Date: 11/2/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2011 10:14:00 AM
super congrats Debbie on another wonderful win luv..
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Date: 11/2/2011 8:33:00 AM
CALGON....TAKE ME AWAY!!! Wow, if you wrote the adds for bath products, sales would skyrocket!!!!! (The water is hot!) :)
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Date: 3/30/2009 3:03:00 PM
A slender neck held aloft a crown of auburn and hazel eyes rivaling Modigliani’s Madonna.....??? email you how... Deborah ..without an address.. input and IF are intriguing.....but maybe I am just thick... as I haven't figured out how to contact somone through soup mail....
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