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The Barred Spiral

Tilted nipple, lend Your acquiescent ballast To rotate earths breast Referring to the “Milky Way” _____________________ *Inspired by Raul Moreno's Nature's Best Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/12/2009 9:28:00 AM

Excellent Haiku. I don't think there is a form of poetry that you Sandra can not do. Love reading your poetry. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 6/14/2009 5:34:00 AM

Clever write Sandra, the most grown up of Haiku>>James

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/20/2009 10:59:00 AM

Beautiful chosen words. Thank you for commenting over my poem Isabella d-este...if you print her picture and highlighted; you can discover unique things.

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/19/2009 3:53:00 PM

I agree with John. I'm going to keep my mouth shut. Great Haiku though. Thanks for the comments also. Nate

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/19/2009 2:11:00 PM

Respectfully; I decline to comment. John

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/19/2009 7:14:00 AM

Wow. You are seriously amazing. Unique in your talent! I am always left in awe. Good luck! Love, Shar

James Peranteau

Date: 5/19/2009 2:15:00 AM

Sandra,..I feel the power of unison here,...the heavens and earth,..to me at least,..I love this! Great poem! james

Sean Kelly

Date: 5/19/2009 1:11:00 AM

Now , who else could have phrased a piece like this ??? Most inventive and unusual , as ever AA . Best of luck in the contest and I wonder what size " bra " is needed !! Ohhh Yes , it's a "wonder-bra" !!!! ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2009 5:18:00 PM

Lovely image of the Milky Way, Alexandra. Only a gifted poet could describe it this way! I'm a fan. Love, Carolyn