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~*~ I am one of nine babies born in a farmer's barn, The barn is cozy and even has an owl door; My birth nest so warm with stuff like grandma's yarn, To keep us fed- into the dark mom will soar. The barn is cozy and even has an owl door, My perfect ears, heard the farmer call us owls; To keep us fed- into the dark mom will soar, While waiting for food I do whistles and howls. My perfect ears, heard the farmer call us owls, Oh, we are the only owl with a heart-shaped face; While waiting for food I do whistles and howls, Today I went hunting- had my own prey to chase. Oh, we are the only owl with a heart-shaped face, Felt the urge to leave today- on my vibrant wings; Today I went hunting- had my own prey to chase, I flew to a church steeple- made a nest of odd things. Felt the urge to leave today- on my vibrant wings, My birth nest so warm with stuff like grandma's yarn; I flew to a church steeple- made a nest of odd things, I am one of nine babies born in a farmer's barn. _______________________ January 31, 2016 Pantoum/Personification/The Barn Owl Copyright Protected, ID 16-750-702-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Owls Personification, Sponsor, Eve Roper Second Place

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Date: 3/19/2016 3:35:00 PM
Fantastic, such descriptive beauty.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/19/2016 9:04:00 PM
Etienne, thanks for visiting my owl poem, and for the beauty !
Date: 2/16/2016 12:42:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your "Owls Personification form WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2016 1:58:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations ~
Date: 2/16/2016 1:22:00 AM
Wonderful write Broken n so is the win.. big congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2016 1:59:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats !
Date: 2/15/2016 10:50:00 AM
Congrats well written owl poem x
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Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2016 11:02:00 AM
Wendy, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, appreciate ~
Date: 2/15/2016 10:17:00 AM
that's an adorable picture and great win, BW. Congratulations.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2016 10:21:00 AM
Lin, thanks for the congratulations and the great, and it's the expression on the baby owl, the peacefulness that I think is awesome, the love of the mother owl is so beautiful . . .
Date: 2/15/2016 10:03:00 AM
Great owl personification and form, BW. Love your picture too! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2016 10:06:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for the compliment and the congrats and the hugs, oh, isn't that the most adorable picture !
Date: 2/15/2016 8:15:00 AM
Wonderful personification, Constance. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:03:00 AM
Daniel, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment ~
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:02:00 AM
Elaine, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats, so appreciated ~
Date: 2/15/2016 7:28:00 AM
Back to say congratulations for writing this prize winning piece of art. Well deserved. Peace:)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2016 10:07:00 AM
Daniel, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment . . .
Date: 2/14/2016 10:58:00 PM
Broken Wing, your “The Barn Owl ” was wonderful perfect form! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2016 12:31:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the contest and my placement, appreciate ~
Date: 1/31/2016 8:07:00 PM
that's a nice form, and you've done it excellently...best of luck in the contest
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Date: 2/1/2016 1:29:00 AM
Sage, thank you so much for the excellent, so grateful ~
Date: 1/31/2016 10:25:00 AM
truly an endearing write, dear constance... you have a thick file of good memories.. huggs
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Constance La France
Date: 2/1/2016 1:30:00 AM
Nette, thanks for the endearing and the hugs !
Date: 1/31/2016 9:05:00 AM
This is one of my favorite forms and you have done a masterful job. It shows further skill that you were able to do it with rhyme.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 10:17:00 AM
Richard, thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment.
Date: 1/31/2016 8:27:00 AM
I like this form and your style....with hints of wisdom through the owl....then the repetition goes so deep....with a story that is at entertaining's peak....you did that bw, don't ever stop....you can always find a way to make a jaw drop....;)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 8:50:00 AM
Eric, thank you so much for that nice comment and the compliments, so grateful ~
Date: 1/31/2016 6:49:00 AM
Wonderful poem I love the form you used and the personification is beautiful... incidentally the dress I wore on my birthday has little owls on it and hubby got me an owl doorstop as a gift:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 8:17:00 AM
Jan, thanks for visiting and for the wonderful and beautiful, oh your dress and gift must be lovely !
Date: 1/31/2016 5:39:00 AM
Gracefully personified..... GL for the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 8:18:00 AM
Archana, oh I love that word, gracefully, thank you ~
Date: 1/31/2016 5:18:00 AM
Hi Broken Wings.. I love owls. Majestic creatures indeed and I love how you brought them to life in this great write. I think you'll do well in the contest. Blessings Carl
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 8:20:00 AM
Carl, thank you for the compliment, oh yes owls are delightful creatures, I just love the images I found of the mother barn owl and her baby !
Date: 1/31/2016 5:01:00 AM
I could almost hear those whistles and howls... hoots in the darkness.... and the vibrancy of those wings as they beat in the still night air.... Thank you :)
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Date: 1/31/2016 5:30:00 AM
Hi Broken wings... no need to stop... Why limit yourself? Continue and complete the poem, if in your heart it is still incomplete.. Then you can sit back, smile and sigh with satisfaction :)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 5:06:00 AM
Thomas, oh thanks for that nice comment, I had so much more to say about the barn owls but well was limited, silent hunters on majestic wings, perfect hearing, they do not need their eyes to hunt, adorable babies with their heart-shaped faces, little hoots and whistles and snapping beaks, and oh so pretty to behold ~
Date: 1/31/2016 4:37:00 AM
Well done and I love the subject matter. Always been fascinated by owls. Good luck in contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 4:39:00 AM
Daniel, thanks so much for the nice comment, I just loved this theme...

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