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The Awakening

The early Spring rain pounded the crusty sleepers from the All Seeing Eye of Dawn. Like a conductor raising percussion instruments; the rain song joined the cacophony of wind and the crackling sound of Spring ice sprung from it's earthen entrapment rising mist like toward the heavens.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/9/2009 3:01:00 AM
This, is amazing. I could feel see and smell the rain, brilliant imagry. love, Kristin
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Date: 2/8/2009 9:07:00 AM
Very lovely, and named appropriately! Beautiful description of awakening to spring. Excellent write! Love, Amy
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Date: 2/8/2009 8:50:00 AM
Congrats. this is a most fantastic description of those spring downpours. Your comparison to the orchestra is simply wonderful. Déirdre
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Date: 2/8/2009 8:43:00 AM
Awesome imagery - brilliant in fact! I am there hearing, seeing and even smelling the rain. So well written. love, Shar
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