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The Aurum River

A burning golden river. A thousand ember dots. Whose endless waking slivers, Hide liquid molten knots A contented purring timbre Of viscous weary rock, Caught in eyes of amber And weeping molten locks Its ingot rivlet ripples Wafting whispers in the air. Its quaking thunder trickles, Build shaking sunder mares Brushing one another, Aurus tears they bleed Darkened flesh they smother, In dripping gilded creed Burning golden river, A weaving flame no more Dusty charred banks quiver Slaked in starlit gore. 7/17/15

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Date: 8/4/2015 1:23:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Avery!
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Date: 8/2/2015 11:51:00 PM
Avery, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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Date: 5/26/2015 8:41:00 AM
Glad to have found this poem. A truly fine read this great morn. Excellent rhyming and flow.... A7
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 5/26/2015 9:35:00 AM
Thank you so much!! Best, Avery
Date: 5/25/2015 9:07:00 PM
Congrats and well done, makes mine look a bit sick but I'm learning. Cheers Kev
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 5/26/2015 1:12:00 AM
hahaha yours was great! I loved it! Thanks so much for the kind words! Best, Avery
Date: 5/25/2015 5:35:00 PM
Hi Avery, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 5/26/2015 1:13:00 AM
Thanks a ton! Best, Avery
Date: 5/25/2015 1:21:00 AM
Avery , Congrats on your BURNING DAYLIGHT win. SKAT
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 5/25/2015 1:50:00 AM
Thank you so much! Best, Avery
Date: 5/24/2015 7:04:00 PM
"slaked in starlit gore." This is one helluva introductory greeting to the soup. Well done, Avery. This gets the full Bostonian - Wicked Awesome Pissa - first place ribbon.
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 5/25/2015 1:49:00 AM
hahahaha Thanks so much! That's such great praise!
Date: 5/14/2015 10:48:00 PM
The ABAB rhyming was done beautifullly in this poem. I also enjoyed the wonderful imagery. Very nicely penned, Avery!... Welcome to Poetry Soup. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 5/14/2015 11:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words! All the best, Avery
Date: 5/7/2015 9:05:00 AM
interesting write and amazing image. : )
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Avery Swarthout
Date: 5/7/2015 9:20:00 AM
Thanks a lot!

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