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The Angry Water

water flares up
disaster looms now
a city sinks

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  1. Date: 11/13/2012 3:21:00 AM
    Powerful stuff, Modupe...I live in hurricane country so I can surely identify with this...congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:23:00 PM
    Modupe, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed stopping by to read all the hurricane haiku... every winner on this list had a mind blowing image... take care~ Always* PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:39:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the Hurricane Haiku contest Modupe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 3:03:00 AM
    I drown while reading your pictorial Haiku. That is why I like yours so much. Greetings from the Netherlands. Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning poem in Hurricanes contest, well done!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on you well deserved win Modupe xx

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:04:00 AM
    that's one monster of a hurricane, MOdupe. Glad to see this one on the winners list. Congrats to you.

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:01:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:01:00 PM
    thank you' san

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 2:00:00 PM
    oh, this must be for the hurricane contest? An apt description of what happens, Modupe. waiting for your David poem!!

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 8:41:00 AM
    great write Modupe,would have been better if you started with the second line,just my thought lol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:18:00 AM
    Personifying water as angry is a great idea for a haiku...I think of so many lives lost from angry waters all over the world...the Japan tsunami...the tsunami that hit India yrs back...can u think of an happy water?? Only think I can think of is a April wonderful...became a granny last wk and so I have been taking care of my daughter and her newborn...and u?....

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 1:46:00 PM
    this is so good, Modupe...enjoyed....