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The Ancient Seer

The ancient Seer sees seas, well beyond the seas the Seer sees. The Highlander Seer sees the seas that traveled did he, to see what the Highlander Seer wanted to see. Upon seeing where the Seer seen, the scene, he'd seen, had been seen, so serene was this scene the Highlander Seer over the seas scene in his dreams! .

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/25/2015 4:27:00 PM

Tongue twister it is, but, I liked it . Thank you much for reading and liking my " A Rose" :)

James Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 3:37:00 PM

Hiya Debbie, glad you liked it. Keep practicing now ;-) hugs//James :) :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/3/2015 4:50:00 PM

Hello James I think this playful piece is well worth stopping to read, I feel I achieved something as well; as I was concerned I might become (scene sick) at some point L O L))) hope all is good with you..'

James Fraser
Date: 5/3/2015 6:22:00 PM

Hiya Joe, I'm fine Sir, and I trust you are also. Thank you kindly for stopping by, for I'm smiling such said write decided you did. Have a blessed week ahead. smiles, James :) :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/3/2015 10:06:00 AM

What a tongue twister! The author has fun with words and plays to our desires to be mentally simulated. Emile.

James Fraser
Date: 5/3/2015 6:09:00 PM

Emile, I go back and re-read to ensure it makes sense. I quite like it for I see beautiful scenes as I read. A blessed week ahead to you, smiles, James :) :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/3/2015 12:55:00 AM

That's quite a tongue twister, you've penned. Quite adorable though, even though I had to read it twice because, my tongue got twisted.

James Fraser
Date: 5/3/2015 6:01:00 PM

I too MLK, purely to ensure it made sense, well to me anyway. Smiles always, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2015 1:24:00 PM

oh i love the clver tongue twister here james lol:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

James Fraser
Date: 5/3/2015 5:59:00 PM

Hiya Jan, as soon as I started writing this Seer say, it flowed so freely. But I sure had to go back and check that it made sense :P - hugs // James xxx