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The Aliens

They gazed out the window down under. Then leaned against the hazy glass. Their arms outstretched in wonder. As all the humans passed. Were they waving hi? Or saying bye? Then they flew. Through blue. Gone. Samia Ali Arroyo For nette onclaud's 'Imagination' contest June 9, 2012

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/20/2013 12:32:00 AM

oh I like how you did this from their point of view! makes me wonder... :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/10/2012 7:12:00 AM

A 'nonet' is an interesting form... you have done wonders with it! Terry

Samia Ali Salama
Date: 9/10/2012 7:21:00 AM

Hi Terry, Thank you very much for your comment! :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/15/2012 3:47:00 PM

A belated congrats on your win, Samia! I knew this one would do well. Have a great weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/15/2012 4:05:00 PM

Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much. I do appreciate your kinds words. You have a great weekend too! :)

Jane Kostman

Date: 6/14/2012 4:14:00 PM

congrats! good write!

Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/14/2012 4:49:00 PM

Hi Jane, Thank you very much. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/14/2012 3:49:00 PM

Cccccongrats on your win..Sara

Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/14/2012 4:49:00 PM

LOL - Thank you very much Sara! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/14/2012 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Imagination" contest Samia. Love, Carol

Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/14/2012 1:37:00 PM

Hi Carol, Thank you very much! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/14/2012 4:33:00 AM

Congratulations Samia perhaps they were the same aliens as mine ha ha xx

Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/14/2012 5:07:00 AM

Hey Mandy, I think they were! LOL Thank you! :)

Rockman Pritts

Date: 6/13/2012 11:58:00 PM

Very nice. It takes a tremendous amount of thought, talent and dedication to produce such a poem. You clearly have all three. Well done on the contest. Rockman :-)

Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/14/2012 5:06:00 AM

Hey Rockman, Thank you so much for your kind comment! You know that I appreciate it! :)