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That Willow Tree

We stood there so close together holding onto elusive dreams. We knew the choice wasn't whether we loved; rather, to what extremes. I thought you thought we were meant to be. You thought I thought love came easily, but I was there to see you smile under that willow tree. I knew we were tempted to stay; who would have thought we'd been this bold? The truth was more than we should say; as some things are best left untold. I hoped you hoped a kiss might move me. You hoped I hoped love came patiently, but I was there to see you cry under that willow tree.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/12/2010 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Larry. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:13:00 PM
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Date: 9/9/2010 5:07:00 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Larry, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2010 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Larry. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2010 2:12:00 PM
Congrats Larry on your HM in Tavarus's contest.. an amazing write.. wonderful win.. enjoy your honor so special..with luv..
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Date: 5/31/2010 4:46:00 AM
Dr.Ram Mehta - thank you for the comment. The tenderness was the goal, I think. Larry
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Date: 5/30/2010 5:59:00 PM
A nice passionate poem, soft and tender
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