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That Ultimate Moment of Passion

Can't help telling you over and over “I am madly in love with you, my darling!” I dream of the two of us every night locked in a tight embrace Our naked bodies becoming one, passionately entangled Ending in an explosion of indescribable vibrations Quivering with over-the-top excitement Culminating in that final moment of sublime exultation When our two souls become one There is no greater feeling that we humans Have ever experienced or ever will It's the ultimate expression of everlasting love In that glorious moment of passionate unification Of body and soul... a most beautiful union This is my feeble attempt to describe that moment divine But try as I might, I have not done it justice So I'll simply call it love, sweet passionate love! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 11/2/2014 1:03:00 PM
Dang Jack, I was so close to adopting you as my Granpa!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2014 1:08:00 PM
LOL Sorry to burst your bubble, Dan... I'm still considered as a "stud"!!!
Date: 11/2/2014 10:38:00 AM
Uh... Jack... You may need to get a room again... perhaps with some padding... We didn't make sweet passionate love... last night... Cathy's gonna be mad if you don't explain this right... Now CAREFULLY think this one thru... She may have a rolling pin... Uh... Maybe you should go and hide that darn thing first... Just saying... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2014 10:52:00 AM
Our cover is blown!!! XXX

Book: Shattered Sighs