That Sounds Better
“ I'm gonna love you till the morning
comes “
“ Till the morning comes “
“ I'm gonna love you till the morning
comes “
“ Till the morning comes “
No! no! So wrong
“ I'm gonna love you till the end of
time “
“ Till the end of time “
“ I'm gonna love you till the end of
time “
“ Till the end of time “
Now that sounds better
Copyright © Daniel Cheeseman | Year Posted 2010
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