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I sought to find that place in mind,
Did I leave it far behind,
or is it in amongst the mess of coulds,
seldom straying far from shoulds,
Maybee I will find it soon,
somewhere between sun and moon,
or maybee my search is all in vein,
oh that though can cause such pain,
maybee I should go here instead of there,
am I the only one to care,
how can I know wich choice is right,
my hopes slip sadly out of sight,
yet tomorrow is another day,
as that place in mind slips away....

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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:26:00 PM
    I'll try to find "this place in my mind" however, my place slipped away 3 years ago.... It was the enlightenment of my day this place always helped make a difference under my own moon or sky..... Bryan, hope you find that place,,, how about some meditation :-) xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 7:07:00 AM
    "That place..." we all have one of those in our minds I guess. Well written and welcome to P/Soup