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That Pack

That Pack We warned you about that pack threatening days and nights. They captured you, brought you down, killer pack Marlboro Lights. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: Something With Great Impact Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Theme: Pack - 20 Words Judged: 12/20/2015

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Poesy Relish

Date: 12/23/2015 11:47:00 AM

A nice well written poem Sandra... some dont realise until too late despite the warnings

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/26/2015 8:38:00 PM

Hello Nad, thank you for stopping by with your positive comment. Yes, it is very difficult for some to give up smoking for sure. Thanks again for your visit. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2015 8:44:00 PM

hey, great minds think alike.... WELL DONE> Don't know your score but I bet it's high. Congrats, and you are my last poet to see tonight. I gotta hurry and GET OFF HERE. hahaha. Good night, dear.

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/21/2015 8:47:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I saw we chose the same theme for 'pack.' Thanks for your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 12/20/2015 3:56:00 PM

As a former smoker I can relate to this poem, Sandra. Gave them up a very long time ago when I realized they were no good. ~ Congratulations on this very worthy win. ~ May I take this opportunity to wish you all the best for Christmas and the New Year. Blessings. // paul

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/21/2015 8:50:00 AM

Good for you for stopping, Paul. I never tried it, thank goodness (but I do have mild COPD from second-hand...). Thanks for your congrats, and I wish you and yours a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year too! Sandra