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That Night

The moment when you held me When I really saw the purity in your words When I heard the sadness in you’re tone When you tried to seem okay But you were all broken When you gave me the words In no serious matter As they sank deep inside me I preserved the moment I kept it in me I seized it into my heart It was so true I hugged you so deeply You seemed so depressed But you hugged me as well You always were so funny and joketive You always were so happy and light But as I saw you that night You were so dull and dark You were so sad and miserable You had a large weight on your shoulders You worked so hard for everything You admired every book you read You gave me advice in every matter You appreciated my writings unlike before And you were just waiting for the moment It will all go away You were just waiting for you’re plead To be answered As I waved to you goodbye And felt the coming tears falling from you’re eyes… I left

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/11/2010 12:17:00 PM
I read it a couple of times, for it to sink in. I started to feel the sadness from your words, then "I left".
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Date: 9/11/2010 11:57:00 AM
deep write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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