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Thanks For Last Night

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Thanks For Last Night

Just for fun, in a crowded store Go up to a lady and say “Thanks for last night” and give her a wink She surely will look dismayed You really must say it loud enough So others in ear shot can hear Especially if it's her hubby she's with Then quickly vamoose, disappear Hide behind some merchandise And wait for the fireworks to begin Watch as she tries to convince her man She hasn't been living in sin If you want to try this for yourself Make sure you can get away Or hubby will wipe the grin off your face And leave you in disarray! © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:14:00 PM
    Now now..that just might cause too much fun...

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 4/24/2013 9:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    FUN??? Life threatening maybe! LOL Hugs dear Donna! xoxox
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 1:25:00 PM
    Oh Jack...Jack... Jack... Even my dragon's not dumb enough to try this... Shame one you... If someone's jealous...OMG... I think I'll stick to telling people to let Prince Albert out of the can.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 4/24/2013 6:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ahhh the old Prince Albert in a can trick... BTW how old are you??? Hugs xoxox
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Omg (I don't say that often mind you), what a devious little man you are! Though it somehow doesn't seem surprising. I've always wanted to prank call someone, or some company, but I'm too timid. And here you are testing two peoples faith in each other! I laugh and I cry... it's terrible but hilarious...

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 4/24/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This dirty old bugger is grinning from ear to ear. Haven't actually done this but my evil and malicious mind is urging me on! LOL
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 6:40:00 AM
    I can see this backfiring if you are not careful in what you are doing! I can imagine doing this to a couple that are your friends, then saying this in a group of people...and watch the fun begin! But to a stranger...your risking arm and limb! But I must say Jack, this is a very funny idea my friend! I really enjoyed reading it this morning! You have crafted an interesting thought here, maybe somebody will try it and report back to us at how it went!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 4/24/2013 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thought of trying it but then I thought I could put my life in danger!!! LOL