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Thank you

What can i do mum, to show that i love you?
How will you know, you’re a friend and not a foe?
You need to know how precious you are...
You shine in the dark nestled amongst a billion stars!
Through your struggles, your pain, heartache and tears
You never gave in; you just veiled your fears
Your relentless serenity, your conscientious charm
Your instincts of protection which keeps me from harm
So tell me mum, what can i do to show that i love you?
“My child...a simple thank you will more than do”

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  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:56:00 AM
    Lovely and well written. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

    Hiramun Avatar Claudene Hiramun
    Date: 9/17/2012 9:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you