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Terror Beyond Imagination

I’ve become stagnant, unmoving I seem to unmake everything near me What once was, is no longer true I harbor terrible feelings of imagination I bear the unthinkable in my chest I must carry heartache and tears The world beyond makes no sense And I am in the center of all chaos Russell Sivey I picked this poem as my favorite due to it's depressive nature and gloomy feel where the poem is filled with wild imagination and strong visualization. I can write some really gloom and doom poetry but none that I have written are really this good, to this extent. This poem is my favorite poem(for now).

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Date: 9/28/2011 8:32:00 AM
R.S., ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
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Date: 9/21/2011 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2011 6:48:00 PM
Congrats Russell on second place win with this favorite poem so awesome luv... exciting one..
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:29:00 PM
Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Russell
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Date: 9/20/2011 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Russell. Well done
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Date: 9/1/2011 3:12:00 PM
deep reflection with a beautiful sense of acceotancem russel.. i like internal musings and this one is an impressive maze of artwrods... grreat work! :) huggs, nette
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/1/2011 3:13:00 PM
*acceptance*
Date: 9/1/2011 1:08:00 PM
Such a powerful write, Russell - hope it's just fictional, my friend
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Date: 9/1/2011 12:10:00 PM
expressions of feeling trapped and caged by emotions and surroundings Russell ..quite sure we all have felt this way at one time or another luv.. but the world beyond exists and no chaos there ...wow..
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:46:00 AM
Hmmmmm Sounds like you have the same malady my hubby has. If you figure out what it is let me know. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/31/2011 11:04:00 PM
It does sound terrifying, well written. Lee
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Date: 8/31/2011 10:14:00 PM
Aptly said and well writ, but I can't help but think it describes every day for a lot of people.
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Date: 8/31/2011 8:47:00 PM
sounds like a saturn opposition to me. you have a gift, russell... thanks for giftin' me with it. namaste ~n
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Date: 8/31/2011 8:46:00 PM
really great poem Russell....very well penned...chiquita
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